On Thu, Sep 1, 2011 at 15:51, EMAD <its_emad@yahoo.com> wrote:
> Cool Air Mail which provides webwatch services to monitor websites. It send you an email alert when page is updated, or when a certain word, line or paragraph is updated on page.
> You can also create your own unique e-mail alert service by specifying a web page and a critical word to receive content from the web page according to your specifications when the page updates. Specify a date and time in the future when you want to send an e-mail to yourself or your contacts.
I looked at the web page after reading your email, and the first thing
that I noticed was: too much text. Most of it gets in the way of
actually using the site. You can replace almost everything on the
front page with the above two paragraphs, and it'll immediately be
obvious what your website does. Right now, it's hard to figure that
out from
> The services provided by us give you the opportunity to require virtually any piece of information available on the internet. The idea is that you give us the criteria that defines what you would like to have. When the required information becomes accessable on the web, it is sent by e-mail to you.
I'm not looking for an "opportunity;" you need to sell your service.
I'm not a web designer, but I came up with this simpler look:
http://pastebin.com/G0QDip9Q
It doesn't convey all the information your current front page does,
but it does highlight the main use case. (It probably doesn't look
good in anything but Chrome.)
As an aside, from past experience working with URL shorteners, I
should point out that your "recent searches" table will soon fill up
with spam and/or porn links. You might want to moderate the URLs and
searches that appear there.
Faried.
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